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Re-Cropped Frisbee in the Fog

Posted by
john4jack (Corvallis, Oregon, United States) on 9 January 2010 in People & Portrait and Portfolio.

Yesterday, I met with my photographer buddies for our weekly coffee gathering. Bill Laing had taken the "Frisbee in the Fog" shot and cropped it to a portrait orientation, plus adding some other editing. This does a much better job of focusing on the action. I did a slightly different crop and added some Structure in Viveza 2 to bring out the trees in the background. This is the results. Major point: input from other photographers is very valuable.

NIKON D700 1/640 second F/8.0 ISO 200 70 mm (35mm equiv.)

PATRICK from miramas, France

just 5 stars!!
good week end

9 Jan 2010 5:37am

MontereyJohn from Salinas, California, United States

I love this on every level ... composition, light, POV etc etc. Beautiful.

9 Jan 2010 6:28am

Dulcie from Danville, CA, United States

I concur with MontereyJohn. And you are right...that was good input and your image is even more outstanding than before !!

9 Jan 2010 6:40am

Paco Díaz from Palma de Mallorca, Spain

The image had quality enough to make this radical cropping. I like both, but I agree: this one is more powerful and the details and colors and trees in the background are more present and impact more.
I don't know this "Viveza", what is it?

9 Jan 2010 7:11am

@Paco Díaz: Take a look at this http://www.niksoftware.com/viveza/usa/entry.php

*MЯG* from Tehran, Iran

i like it
its a neat composition

9 Jan 2010 7:36am

LESLIE from norwich, United Kingdom

WORKS for ME Jack .... yes a more striking & powerful image

9 Jan 2010 7:52am

Lyl & Roll from Besançon, France

J'aime beaucoup et le brouillard semble ralentir la scène. Bon week-end

9 Jan 2010 8:31am

Fonts from Barcelona, Spain

Thank you for your wonderful explanation Jack! I agree with your reflection on shared experience with other photographers! A reflection of a "teacher"!. The image you uploaded today is wonderful! I imagine that you've exceeded the expectations of enhancing an image using another point of view! Give me envy! Kisses, Adela

9 Jan 2010 8:44am

Manel from Girona, Spain

Good fog series. Congrat

9 Jan 2010 9:13am

Marie LC from Voiron, France

tout simplement beau

9 Jan 2010 9:24am

kerfendal from Paris, France

a poetic atmosphere

9 Jan 2010 9:27am

Lorraine from Gatineau, Canada

Fantastic action shot in the fog, 5 from me too

9 Jan 2010 9:33am

k@ from Paris, France

What a good idea, this cropped one ! Love it even more, kind of magic ! Bravo*

9 Jan 2010 9:43am

Curly from South Shields, United Kingdom

An excellent crop Jack, very effective in bringing us closer to the action.

9 Jan 2010 10:44am

Jaap from Friesland, Netherlands

With this crop the shot is even better than the original picture. I like it.

9 Jan 2010 11:07am

zahra from shiraz, Iran

great,very cool.

9 Jan 2010 11:56am

vu@granby - Wolfgang from Granby, Canada

One shot, two very different pictures. I do like this one better, but the first one had its merits...

9 Jan 2010 1:21pm

Denise from Duncannon, United States

Love this shot, I will show my daughter she plays for her college...

9 Jan 2010 1:34pm

MrsAmber from West Wickham, United Kingdom

Interesting to see this one...yes I like it even better than the original. It's good to talk!

9 Jan 2010 1:34pm

Evelyne Dubos from Le Mans, France

A great capture at the good moment. And i love the foggy atmosphere and the tonality.

9 Jan 2010 3:10pm

Meysam from Montreal, Canada

Now, we realize how hight they have jumped!

9 Jan 2010 3:19pm

B. Thomas from Arlington, Texas, United States

This one emphasizes the action more. Nice.

9 Jan 2010 3:55pm

MARIANA from Waterloo, Canada

Back to your wonderful foggy shot , but with such a smart crop . I love it better than previous one . It looks more as a brand new shot . Amazing how resolution stays wonderful !

9 Jan 2010 4:07pm

Anna.C from LA ROCHELLE, France

the best one ! dynamic cropping and good focus on the action !

9 Jan 2010 4:09pm

BJ from Murfreesboro, United States

great action shot

9 Jan 2010 4:24pm

Yvon from Orleans, France

great composition

9 Jan 2010 4:27pm

elmer from France

hello. photo dynamic yet serene because of the fog.

9 Jan 2010 4:41pm

dan from Paris, France

Long live the sport in any seasons !

9 Jan 2010 4:43pm

Slackwater - don from spokane, United States

The re-cropped version is much more effective. I like how reducing the number of players and moving right into the principal action has transformed the shot. Excellent re-make.

9 Jan 2010 4:48pm

alex centrella from California, United States

what a great capture !

9 Jan 2010 5:10pm

LauraS from Chico, United States

I like them both, but this is very dynamic.

9 Jan 2010 5:48pm

SOUL AFLAME from The bosom of Mother Nature, United Kingdom

Eyes always see differently, and it's often good to have another point of view and input. This works really well, Jack

9 Jan 2010 5:49pm

Tracy from La Selva Beach, United States

I agree, this really brings the action front and center!

9 Jan 2010 6:07pm

hgmartins photography from Ontario, GTA, Canada

As most of your photo viewers, I also agree this is more powerful shot. And a very good action shot 5*****

9 Jan 2010 6:37pm

Scene by Sharon Photography from Kingston, Ontario, Canada

great atmospheric shot - love it

9 Jan 2010 6:45pm

Steve Rice from Olympia, United States

This really does get us into the action. A superior image.

9 Jan 2010 6:58pm

Sof from Neuchâtel, Switzerland

Jolis mouvements dans la brûme...on a l'impression que tout se fait en silence

9 Jan 2010 7:21pm

Jerry - a moment in time [...] from Chicago, United States

very nice photo. The fog works out great here.

9 Jan 2010 7:30pm

Veronelle from Lens, France

:-) a winter day :-))

9 Jan 2010 7:34pm

Michael from Deer Park, United States

Excellent. I love the drama in this photo faded by a moderate layer of fog. Nicely done!

9 Jan 2010 8:05pm

vu@granby - gilles daigneault from Granby, Québec, Canada

Very nice work, Jack!


gilles d.

9 Jan 2010 8:16pm

Frances Berry from Athens, GA, United States

The cropping really makes this one a stand-out photo.

9 Jan 2010 10:26pm

Scott F. Schilling from San Martin, United States

I like this one too! This definitely isolates the action and with the fog the light is perfect!

9 Jan 2010 11:00pm

Viewfinder from Bradenton, FL, United States

Definitely more focused on the action. But with the mystery of the fog still a major factor in the overall comp. I like the crop/processing very much.

9 Jan 2010 11:11pm

JamesC from portland, United States

love the fog and action shot combination

10 Jan 2010 12:13am

Susan from Fort Lauderdale, FL, United States

You took the idea, ran with it, and got a superb result!!! Great Job !!!

10 Jan 2010 12:25am

akarui from Kagoshima, Japan

Yes I find it much better. In my comment on the original picture I have hesitated to suggest you this crop or an other one too. Not every body is open to suggestions and it is a good point for you Jack.

10 Jan 2010 1:07am

Chris Parr from Jefferson City, United States

Splendid action shot. I agree with the others, the crop really made a nice difference.

10 Jan 2010 1:35am

Hilde Morin from Portland, United States

I also like how the two tree silhouettes are now visible!

10 Jan 2010 1:46am

@Hilde Morin: Yea, Hilde; I totally agree.

Ajay from Pune, India

Love the way they are frozen in the air. :-)

10 Jan 2010 3:43am

Claudia from Illinois, United States

Perfect crop! Such a great image...hope it gets the spotlight! :)

10 Jan 2010 4:28am

@Claudia: Thanks. I think that I have made the Spotlight in once in over a year. Don't seem to have what they are looking for.

Mirza Ahmad from Amsterdam, Netherlands

A fine capture, with some good processing.

10 Jan 2010 4:58am

Barbara from Florida, United States

I like it before but cropping was a good choice. It puts the action right in front of us. It is like they are floating in air.

10 Jan 2010 5:22am

daniela scharnowski from Berlin, Germany

That was a good job - now the action is more prominent, very good!

10 Jan 2010 5:41pm

Isidro from Barcelona, Spain

interesante captura 5*, fantástico momento!

10 Jan 2010 9:55pm

Levi Cusio from West Vancouver, Canada

oh perfect action moment captured! and the misty background just adds more drama to the photo. very beautiful!

11 Jan 2010 12:03am

Hema Iyer from Bangalore, India

Lovely action snap

12 Jan 2010 7:55am

---------Photo-Spice---------- from Konstanz, Germany

Very cool image!!! Must be a mission to play Frisbee in the mist though!!!
JH

15 Jan 2010 3:39pm

lux from Munich, Germany

This sport foto is different from what we usually see. And it shows well that even a misty day is a good day for fotos. So good.

17 Jan 2010 2:37pm

Marie from FRESNES, France

jolie scène.

18 Jan 2010 9:26pm